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You can see his appearance, the brown eyes, the dark hair.
But you can't see the burden he struggles so hard to bare.
Underneath his clothes and on the surface of his skin,
He's got scars to show and about five million sins.
He'll hold the vodka bottle by the neck and pour one shot for every mistake.
One down, and four-million, nine-hundred, ninety-nine more to take.
It's a series of unfortunate events and he's drunk enough to kill himself.
He sits at in the bar alone, and stumbles into his car without anyone's help.
He'll drive down the road and pass the street sign.
"Construction Ahead: Caution, Do not drive."
He'll zip on right past it, full speed ahead.
His car could crash head-on, but it remains undead.
He wasn't trying to kill himself, but cease the pain instead.
He'd wake up to a broken back from a heavier burden,
And cry because this is one more thing he's failed at.
©2005-2009 ~brokenx3loser
:iconbrokenx3loser:

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a giant metaphor, i guess.


between pain and living.

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:iconevery1hasproblems:
=/ this is so sad. the writing is amazing, though :)
:iconbrokenx3loser:
thanks =) yeah idk what came over me. . iwas so happy but then when i was trying to get all the happy thoughts on paper all i got was sad.

i'm wierd like that. haha but thanks =)


YTAYAYAYAY FAVORITES!
:iconlostxsoul666:
wow i love it. good job.

--
--Life is like a dick When it gets had Fuck it
--Praise the Emo Monkey x3 lyl ash
--Ashley is the coolest mother fucker on earth!!
--Ashley and Matty are my bffls! -kisses their hands-
:iconbrokenx3loser:
aww thanks mary <33


and thanks for adding it to your favorites =) it means alot to me
:iconlostxsoul666:
anytime doll <3

--
--Life is like a dick When it gets had Fuck it
--Praise the Emo Monkey x3 lyl ash
--Ashley is the coolest mother fucker on earth!!
--Ashley and Matty are my bffls! -kisses their hands-
:iconlost-and-broken:
aww so sad. good work kiddo <33

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